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game design ftue hero journey audit
Audit game onboarding using the Hero's Journey to improve first-session retention and player emotional connection.
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game design ftue hero journey audit
Example session with this skill installed
Audit the FTUE for a dark fantasy ARPG where the player starts in a jail cell, follows a ghost guide for 10 minutes of combat basics, and then faces a boss they are scripted to lose against.
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- Compiled the game design ftue
- Generated the UI component
I have audited the FTUE for your dark fantasy ARPG. While the atmosphere is strong, the scripted loss at the "Threshold" creates a high risk of "Threshold Humiliation" for new players.
FTUE Hero's Journey Audit: Dark Fantasy ARPG
| Stage | Analysis | Verdict |
|---|---|---|
| Call to Adventure | The jail cell start is a classic "Ordinary World" exit, but the "Why" is missing. Why should the hero escape? | Weak |
| Meeting the Mentor | The ghost guide provides essential gifts (basic sword) but lacks emotional weight. It feels like a floating UI element. | Neutral |
| Crossing the Threshold | The scripted boss loss violates the "Competence" need. Players often mistake design intent for bad balancing. | Critical Risk |
| Psychological Needs | Autonomy is low due to the linear jail corridor. Competence is stripped away by the scripted death. | Low Satisfaction |
Drop-Risk Diagnosis
The primary drop-risk occurs at the 12-minute mark. After spending 10 minutes learning mechanics (investment), the player is forced into a failure state (punishment). This creates a "Competence Trap" where the player feels the game is unfair rather than challenging.
Recommendations
Reframe the Mentor: Give the ghost a name and a shared goal. Instead of "Press X to attack," have the ghost beg the player to "Break these chains so we can both be free."
2.
Adjust the Threshold: Instead of a scripted death, have the boss "break" the environment, forcing the player to escape. This maintains the boss's threat without hurting the player's sense of agency.
3.
Early Hook: Insert a 15-second cinematic or environmental storytelling piece in the cell that hints at the "inviting fantasy"—show what the player is fighting to get back to.
Next steps
- Review the ghost's dialogue script for emotional hooks.
- A/B test a version where the boss fight is winnable but ends in a narrow escape.
- Map out the "Part 0" framing to establish the hero's motivation before the first combat.
game-design-ftue-hero-journey-audit.tsx
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About this skill
The problem
Tutorials often focus on teaching controls while forgetting to hook the player emotionally. This results in "yellow-arrow servitude" where players mindlessly follow prompts before bouncing due to a lack of agency or interest.
What it does
- Evaluates the first 30 seconds to the first full session using monomyth stages.
- Identifies friction points like "lore drowning" and "pre-play bureaucracy" that kill retention.
- Analyzes the "Meeting the Mentor" phase to ensure guidance builds connection rather than just dumping text.
- Audits the "Crossing the Threshold" moment to verify the player feels early competence and autonomy.
- Diagnoses specific drop-risk patterns where players are likely to abandon the game.
Why this beats prompting it yourself
Standard prompts usually result in a generic UX checklist. This skill applies a specific narrative and psychological framework (Self-Determination Theory) to ensure the onboarding feels like a heroic arc, not a chore list. It identifies subtle emotional failures that standard UI audits miss.
Use cases
- Reviewing early-stage prototypes to ensure the "Call to Adventure" is clear.
- Diagnosing high bounce rates in the first 5 minutes of a live mobile or PC game.
- Refining mentor character scripts to provide "gifts" rather than just instructions.
- Pacing the introduction of complex mechanics to avoid cognitive overload.
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